Wrong Turn by LadyM

Title : Wrong Turn
Author : LadyM
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/minaa3/
Reviewer : Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 5/5
Your title fit with the story perfectly. I was able to understand why the title was named, Wrong Turn.

Poster/Background/Appearance: 10/10
The poster was really good ! It had that moody feeling into it which made me into the story even more.

Forewords: 9/10
Your poster was absolutely beautiful ! It made me into the story. The dark mood and Seung Hyun with his eyes, everything. Adding in a turn sign and everything. Perfect.

Plot: 11/15
These kind of plots seems like one of those horror movies. They go to a house/apartment and then there is someone in there trying to rape/hurt you. But overall it was good and enjoyable.

Characterization: 6/10
I felt like you didn’t describe the characters at all. I was able to understand sometimes but not all the times.

Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Throughout the story, I felt like was able to predict what was going to happen next. For example, the parts with Mina being lost and then the random guy coming in, all predictable.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I spotted a few mistakes here and there but not that much. I didn’t have to stop in the middle of the story to re-read over and over just because I didn’t understand.

Flow: 8/10
The flow was great considering it was only four chapters. Everything seemed to go smoothly but there were parts when I thought it was going slow.

Writing Style: 15/15
I absolutely loved your writing style. I was clean and very easy to read. It made me interested in the story.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I really enjoyed this story ! This would be a story I would recommend to anyone out there. (:
Total : 86/100

Bonus : 5/5
This was for the hard work you put into your story. As I was reading, it seemed like you worked really hard on it.

Overall Total : 91/100

B o h y u n ! by Boeun.

Title : B o h y u n !
Author : Boeun.
Reviewer : Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 4/5
Your title was really interesting and unique because I’ve never read a story that has a mix of the main characters names, but it wasn’t that eye-grabbing.

Poster/Background/Appearance: 8/10
Your poster was really pretty, but it was kind of plain. Although it didn’t really bother me with the reading, and I like it how you made your own poster.

Forewords: 4/10
I like how you didn’t put anything about the characters so that the readers could learn about the characters. But it was really boring to me, so that’s the points are really low. But what I didn’t get at first was the, “It’s not Tembo… but Bohyun!” but as I kept reading, I found out what it was. You made it really clear and all.

Plot: 10/15
Only some parts of the plots were cliché, while others were not. But I like the idea of how the part when Young Bae said to ask the girl out as a dare but the others were saying it was too cliché, such as a drama. You added in your own ideas so that it doesn’t seem like the story wouldn’t be too boring and cliché. Overall, it was interesting in its own way.

Characterization: 7/10
I wasn’t able to figure much about the characters, but it wasn’t like I was able to figure anything. Plus it was all in Seung Hyun’s P.O.V., so I was able to figure out more about Seung Hyun then Boeun.

Creativity/Originality: 8/10
The creativity was awesome. From her actually accepting Seung Hyun and not being those kind of girls that just say no to the mean guy and the part when Boeun changed herself on purpose to get ride of Seung Hyun. Those two parts really WOW’ed me.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I spotted really minor mistakes and I didn’t have to keep reading over and over again which is good.

Flow: 7/10
The flow was great, but I felt like the ending was a bit rushed. But it wasn’t like super fast so that I didn’t me make me go, “GAHD” or too slow. I was able to understand everything that was happening.

Writing Style: 14/15
Your writing style was great ! You didn’t just make the sentences short, but actually put long descriptions. It wasn’t boring because of all the description it had and everything. I was able to understand every single word without any confusions.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I absolutely enjoyed this story ! It was a great story that I was able to read. I actually finished this story in about and hour or so. My favorite part was when Seung Hyun & Young Bae would fight and then Seung Hyun would say “your height” to Young Bae.

Total: 76/100

Bonus: 5/5
Congratulations ! You have a new reader : me.(:
I look forward to reading your other stories soon ~

Overall Total : 81/100