Wrong Turn by LadyM

Title : Wrong Turn
Author : LadyM
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/minaa3/
Reviewer : Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 5/5
Your title fit with the story perfectly. I was able to understand why the title was named, Wrong Turn.

Poster/Background/Appearance: 10/10
The poster was really good ! It had that moody feeling into it which made me into the story even more.

Forewords: 9/10
Your poster was absolutely beautiful ! It made me into the story. The dark mood and Seung Hyun with his eyes, everything. Adding in a turn sign and everything. Perfect.

Plot: 11/15
These kind of plots seems like one of those horror movies. They go to a house/apartment and then there is someone in there trying to rape/hurt you. But overall it was good and enjoyable.

Characterization: 6/10
I felt like you didn’t describe the characters at all. I was able to understand sometimes but not all the times.

Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Throughout the story, I felt like was able to predict what was going to happen next. For example, the parts with Mina being lost and then the random guy coming in, all predictable.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I spotted a few mistakes here and there but not that much. I didn’t have to stop in the middle of the story to re-read over and over just because I didn’t understand.

Flow: 8/10
The flow was great considering it was only four chapters. Everything seemed to go smoothly but there were parts when I thought it was going slow.

Writing Style: 15/15
I absolutely loved your writing style. I was clean and very easy to read. It made me interested in the story.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I really enjoyed this story ! This would be a story I would recommend to anyone out there. (:
Total : 86/100

Bonus : 5/5
This was for the hard work you put into your story. As I was reading, it seemed like you worked really hard on it.

Overall Total : 91/100