B A D Boys N E X T Exit by Mcmpsly7

Title : B A D Boys N E X T Exit
Author : Mcmpsly7
Link : http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=283957&st=0&p=12959159&#entry12959159
Reviewed by Keerain @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 5/5
I didn’t really get it but I liked it ^^ it has a nice ring to it and it somehow connected with the whole storyline. Oh, and it is definitely alluring!

Poster/Background/Appearance: 2/10
I don’t like it -_- Was it supposed to be a character chart? The poster looks stuffy and rushed.

Forewords: 10/10
Its witty, fun and nicely done! It made me want to read more. You gave me a preview of what the story’s going to be about, you told me beforehand the connections between the two high-school s and how your main character relates to all of this. Nice job!

Plot: 13/15
Its refreshing ^^ Usually, I would say bleckh to cliché high-school-feud dramas but your story is refreshing! I love the twists you inserted in the storyline though some scenes are quite typical for this type of plots.

Characterization: 10/10
TEN! You defined each and every one of your character’s profile to me. I connected with them easily and fell in love with everyone ROFL (mom and dad included XD)

Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Your twists are so lovable! You are very creative and I love how you made the plot into your OWN. Nice job ^^

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10
I spotted a minute amount of grammar errors and few spelling errors. I would recommend more usage of bigger words because big words impress people ^^

Flow: 10/10
It was awesome.

Writing Style: 13/15
It is amusing and easy to understand. I love how witty your writing style is (judging from Mooya) and your quirks make my day ^^

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Five-stars, baby <3

Total: 85/100

Bonus: 5/5
I loved the quirks and fun ambience surrounding the storyline. Add me in your pm list XD
Its bubblepopes in soompi or do I have to post to het PM-ed? I don’t know how these things work either -_-

Overall Total: 90/100