Clementine by Faithhh
Title : Clementine
Author : Faithhh
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/spwtlz/
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
Title: 4/5
The title, I’m not if it was a given title for the challenge so don’t really want to say anything.
But it did catch my eye. It was plain because it’s just one word but it wasn’t like a boring one-word.
Poster/Background/Appearance: 9/10
The poster seemed plain but it was nicely done. The mood and everything seemed to sink in with the story.
Forewords: 4/10
Your forewords was really boring. It didn’t have anything but the characters. But since it’s a one-shot, I guess that’s fine.
Plot: 10/15
The part with the accident was and is still used in a lot of stories. But I like you started out at an airport and not at like a park, house, or someone just being lost outside. Because usually when I read stories, the beginning is like two little kids meet at a park but then either the girl or guy has to leave. You know what I mean?
Characterization: 5/10
Wasn’t able to tell much about the characters. You focused more on the story line instead of the characterization, which is a good thing, but it’s nice to know some things about the characters as well. Just so we get into them.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
The only thing that seemed different from other stories was the part with the airport. It was nicely done. Also the graduation part, it’s always that one of the two don’t remember later on something pops up that makes them remember, and in this case, it was the e-mail. I don’t think it had much creativity/originality.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
I didn’t notice any spelling/grammar mistakes. Everything seemed spelling free.
Any of the spelling or grammar didn’t seem to bother that much.
Flow: 8/10
The flow seemed to go at a right pace, but I also felt like it went by really fast. After the graduation part, everything seemed to go fast for me.
Writing Style: 15/15
I absolutely loved your writing style. I know it was only single lines so it seems like there wouldn’t be much description but it was clearly explained. I didn’t have much problems not understanding what you were writing about.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I can’t say I didn’t enjoy it and I can’t say I enjoyed it. But it’s pretty much in the middle. It wasn’t so boring that it made me go, “UGH. I want to finish this as soon as possible” or “I love this story ! I wish there was a sequel to it”
Total: 77/100
Bonus: 4/5
Your story was nicely done and I enjoyed it. It seemed like your put a lot of work into it ^^
Overall Total: 81/100
Author : Faithhh
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/spwtlz/
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
Title: 4/5
The title, I’m not if it was a given title for the challenge so don’t really want to say anything.
But it did catch my eye. It was plain because it’s just one word but it wasn’t like a boring one-word.
Poster/Background/Appearance: 9/10
The poster seemed plain but it was nicely done. The mood and everything seemed to sink in with the story.
Forewords: 4/10
Your forewords was really boring. It didn’t have anything but the characters. But since it’s a one-shot, I guess that’s fine.
Plot: 10/15
The part with the accident was and is still used in a lot of stories. But I like you started out at an airport and not at like a park, house, or someone just being lost outside. Because usually when I read stories, the beginning is like two little kids meet at a park but then either the girl or guy has to leave. You know what I mean?
Characterization: 5/10
Wasn’t able to tell much about the characters. You focused more on the story line instead of the characterization, which is a good thing, but it’s nice to know some things about the characters as well. Just so we get into them.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
The only thing that seemed different from other stories was the part with the airport. It was nicely done. Also the graduation part, it’s always that one of the two don’t remember later on something pops up that makes them remember, and in this case, it was the e-mail. I don’t think it had much creativity/originality.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
I didn’t notice any spelling/grammar mistakes. Everything seemed spelling free.
Any of the spelling or grammar didn’t seem to bother that much.
Flow: 8/10
The flow seemed to go at a right pace, but I also felt like it went by really fast. After the graduation part, everything seemed to go fast for me.
Writing Style: 15/15
I absolutely loved your writing style. I know it was only single lines so it seems like there wouldn’t be much description but it was clearly explained. I didn’t have much problems not understanding what you were writing about.
Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I can’t say I didn’t enjoy it and I can’t say I enjoyed it. But it’s pretty much in the middle. It wasn’t so boring that it made me go, “UGH. I want to finish this as soon as possible” or “I love this story ! I wish there was a sequel to it”
Total: 77/100
Bonus: 4/5
Your story was nicely done and I enjoyed it. It seemed like your put a lot of work into it ^^
Overall Total: 81/100
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