D i f f e r e n t F r o m T h e R e s t by Tylene
Title : D I f f e r e n t F r o m T h e R e s t
Author : Tylene
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Tiena/
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
Title: 4/5
`The title went really well with the story.
Poster/Background/Appearance: 5/10
`I know you have a poster for your story, but since it says “This image or video has been moved or deleted” You should fix your poster. Although, the color of the story is a little but bright. I had to highlight the words to read them. Try using a bit of a darker color.
Forewords: 8/10
`I could say the forewords was okay, not outstanding, but understandable. It had a little bit of a summary and all the characters. It was nice to know what this story was going to be about and learn about the characters beforehand.
Plot: 13/15
`This plot was really different from what I read. This was somewhat unique and not a lot of stories on wangling are like this.
Characterization: 7/10
`I have to say, this section was pretty poorly done. I wasn’t able to figure out anything. Try to put in more descriptions about them. The readers would want to picture the characters in their mind while reading.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
`Like I said before, I haven`t read any kind of plots like this. It was interesting in a way, but also seemed like a story that you could see in a fantasy movie or something.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 6/10
`I spotted quite a few grammar and spelling errors. I know that not everyone is perfect, and no one spends their time reading over and over again before posting, because we all make mistakes. But try proofreading at least once before posting. You should also capitalize what needs to be.
Flow: 2/10
`The flow for this story was just wow. It jumped from place to place without you explaining what really happened. Also, I thought that the flow was going really fast.
Writing Style: 10/15
`I didn`t have much trouble with your writing style, except that it didn’t have much description in the writing. It seemed like you were rushing on your writing.
Overall Enjoyment: 2/5
`Honestly, I didn’t really enjoy this. It wasn’t outstanding or anything.
Total: 65/100
Bonus: -/5
Overall Total: 65/100
Author : Tylene
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Tiena/
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
Title: 4/5
`The title went really well with the story.
Poster/Background/Appearance: 5/10
`I know you have a poster for your story, but since it says “This image or video has been moved or deleted” You should fix your poster. Although, the color of the story is a little but bright. I had to highlight the words to read them. Try using a bit of a darker color.
Forewords: 8/10
`I could say the forewords was okay, not outstanding, but understandable. It had a little bit of a summary and all the characters. It was nice to know what this story was going to be about and learn about the characters beforehand.
Plot: 13/15
`This plot was really different from what I read. This was somewhat unique and not a lot of stories on wangling are like this.
Characterization: 7/10
`I have to say, this section was pretty poorly done. I wasn’t able to figure out anything. Try to put in more descriptions about them. The readers would want to picture the characters in their mind while reading.
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
`Like I said before, I haven`t read any kind of plots like this. It was interesting in a way, but also seemed like a story that you could see in a fantasy movie or something.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 6/10
`I spotted quite a few grammar and spelling errors. I know that not everyone is perfect, and no one spends their time reading over and over again before posting, because we all make mistakes. But try proofreading at least once before posting. You should also capitalize what needs to be.
Flow: 2/10
`The flow for this story was just wow. It jumped from place to place without you explaining what really happened. Also, I thought that the flow was going really fast.
Writing Style: 10/15
`I didn`t have much trouble with your writing style, except that it didn’t have much description in the writing. It seemed like you were rushing on your writing.
Overall Enjoyment: 2/5
`Honestly, I didn’t really enjoy this. It wasn’t outstanding or anything.
Total: 65/100
Bonus: -/5
Overall Total: 65/100
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