Dedicated by ctanonymous

Title : Dedicated (Valentine's Day Special - Completed OS)
Author : ctanonymous
Link : http://winglin.net/fanfic/ctanonymous_4/
Reviewer : Tinaher @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 5/5
I love your title. It might not catch peoples’ eyes, but it caught mine, because your story is dedicated to love ones, and this story is pretty similar to my love life. LOLs.

Poster/Background: 10/10
Your poster and background ROCKS! I love it a lot, and it matches the poster!

Forewords: 10/10
Your foreword is fabulous! It explains who the characters were, and how you started explaining about Hebe being hurt was great!

Plot: 15/15 Your plot was so sad and good. It’s a good love story, and one that I had never read before. Your story really made me thought twice about my boyfriend and us. Love your story lots!

Flow: 9/10 The flow was fast. But it doesnn’t matter at all, because I loved it a lot! I just wished that you could have written this into a story.

Writing Style: 5/5
Your writing style was awesome. I understood every word, and it was remarkably GREAT!

Character Development: 10/10
Your character development is great. It talked about the two main ones and I liked it.

Creativity/Originality: 10/10
You are a creative person on writing about this story. It’s so good, and I love your creativity. Keep up the good work!

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabularies: 10/10
Your grammar and spelling was all perfect. Are you a pro at this? Haha. You really are going to be one good writer one day.

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
I enjoyed reading this story, and I know everyone did too! I envy your work!

Bonus Point: 5/5
I will give you all the 5 points you deserved. I love your story lots, and it made me cry really bad. Your story ROCKS!

Total Points = 99/100