Diary of An Ex-Stalker Fan by teriyaki18

Title : Diary of An Ex-Stalker Fan
Author : teriyaki18
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/tikka2/
Reviewer : Tinaher @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 5/5
Nice title. It’s unique, and it’s really cool how it’s an “Ex”. Hehe..

Poster/Background/Appearance: 9/10
The poster and background is nice. It does show us who the ex-stalker is with a diary.

Forewords: 10/10
Your foreword was cute. I really like it how you started with a prologue. Knowing who the stalker in the beginning is great!

Plot: 15/15
Now your plot is awesome! I have never read a story like this before about an ex-stalker! Is great, and I like it!

Characterization: 10/10
Your characterization is great, but then you don’t really explain to us who they are. But even though you didn’t, I got a chance to know how cute they all acted.

Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Your creativity is GREAT!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10
Your spelling, grammar, and vocabularies are great. You had no mistakes, and an author always double checks, and you did right.

Flow: 9/10
Your flow is going great, but then I think it’s going a little bit too fast on how they both met again in the airplane, and then outside a place where the Wondergirls took Ara.

Writing Style: 15/15
Your writing style is NEAT! I understand every word, and you are really a great writer!

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I enjoyed this story. It’s so cute and funny! I understand how Ara feels when she says she’s over G-Dragon, and sees G-Dragon next to her makes her feel so happy and jumpy.

Total: 98/100

Bonus: 5/5
Of course you’re getting the bonus points. I love your story, I am your new reader, and update soon! Cute story!

Overall Total: 104/100