a Promise to Remember by mcmpsly7

Title : a Promise to Remember
Author : mcmpsly7
Link : http://www.soompi.com/forums/index.php?s=7b6b0f138ca3325e5e8acac88dc217d6&showtopic=276577&st=0&p=12559091&#entry12559091
Reviewed by Keerain @ WonderfulxMemories

Title: 4/5
I like it. It has a sweet ring to it. It does, though, sound common.

Poster/Background/Appearance: 8/10
The poster is awesome and the whole article gives off a soft ambience. I do wish you would change your font size because I had to stick my face in front of my laptop screen to read; tiny fonts and poor eyes don’t go well.

Forewords: 8/10
Its well-written but somehow I felt like it needed more ‘umph’. Its allring but not intriguing enough.

Plot: 13/15
I say its cliché. Long-lost love, separated and re-united but he/she is engaged and yada yada. HOWEVER, you are very very smart; The twists you made were new albeit some scenes were kind of common.

Characterization: 10/10
You never fail to amaze me ^^ TOTALLY AWESOME! At first, I couldn’t really get the whole hyunjin and jinjae thing but as I read on, I started loving them by how you wrote them. <3

Creativity/Originality: 10/10
LUBBBEEELEEH! Like I said, your twists were new and original. I love everyone and everything ^^

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9.5/10
I spotted only speck of dusts on this. There were some but they were almost invincible.

Flow: 10/10
It was awesome ^^

Writing Style: 15/15
I’m starting to fall for yours LOL it is captivating, in a way. What makes it morefun to read are the unexpected scenes and quirks <3

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
From all jinjae’s dorkiness to buyoung’s self and to hyunjin’s feelings and to heerin’s personality;

From the happy moments where hyunjin and buyoung meets to the moments where she confessed and to all the heartbreaking moments where jinjae found out;

I think you know what I’m trying to say; I’m totally in love with this XD

PM ME HOMGSH!

Total : 92.5/100

Bonus : 2/5

Overall Total : 94.5