Shuttering by bluemonkiesx~

Title : Shuttering
Author : bluemonkiesx~
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/stuttering/
Reviewer : Tinaher @ WonderfulxMemories

Title 5/5
Your title was interesting, it matched the story how Seung Ri was stuttering. It was really nice.

Poster/Background 8/10
Your poster and background is ok. You could’ve gotten a background to match the poster. But it’s alright, I still like it.

Forewords 9/10
Your foreword was great. It started out about how much you like a person, and you just don’t know how to tell the person, then you continued it by telling us who are your pairings in the story. That’s what I look for in the forewords.

Plot 15/15
Your plot was great. It went smooth, and it had great details. I love it a lot when it comes to Yaoi stories. Your Yaoi story is a one of kind.

Flow 10/10
The flow was great. It wasn’t too fast, but then it talked about the person’s point of view. I like it.

Writing Style 5/5
Your writing style is neat. I had a good time reading and understanding your story.

Character Development 9/10
Your character development was great. You talked about only the two pairing couples, and it was absolutely great.

Creativity/Originality 10/10
I love your creative mind. You have such good details to put in different point of views. I love it.

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabularies 10/10
Your grammar, spelling, and vocabularies were awesome. No mistakes were made, and that’s a great writer you are.

Overall Enjoyment 10/10
I enjoyed your story a lot. Yaoi are always my favorites, and I hope to read another one from you.

Bonus Point 5/5
You did a great job at writing this story. You deserve this bonus points. I enjoyed reading every bit of your chapter, and I am gladly your new reader! Update some more stories soon!

Total Points = 96/100