Friday, April 24, 2009

To Arron: MISS ME?? ~Your 300 lb. Ex-BFF by minniie

Title : To Arron: MISS ME?? ~Your 300 lb. Ex-BFF
Author : minniie
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/CuTiEhOnEy/
Reviewer : Tinaher @ WonderfulxMemories

Title 5/5
You title matched your story and I love it!

Poster/Background 10/10
Your poster and background was really cute and it matched the story perfectly!!

Forewords 10/10
Your foreword is fabulous! I love how your forewords! You talk about the characters and a summary which is great!

Plot 15/15
Your plot was so sad and good. It’s a good love story, and one that I had never read before. It’s the same like the movie 200 pounds beauty, but I love your story and the movie too!

Flow 10/10
Your flow went great, and I love your story how it went perfectly.

Writing Style 5/5
A great writer always checks twice on their spelling, and you are perfectly great at your writing style. You are really good with your writings, and I support you to write more like this!

Character Development 10/10
Your character development is great. It talked about the main ones, and it was great! It explained how the characters were like, and I hated Aaron Yan. He’s so mean. But overall, I love it.

Creativity/Originality 10/10
You are a creative person on writing about this story. It’s so good, and I love your creativity. Keep up the good work!

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabularies 10/10
Your grammar and spelling was all perfect. Are you a pro at this? Haha. You really are going to be one good writer one day.

Overall Enjoyment 10/10
I enjoyed reading this story, and I know everyone did too! I envy your work! I wish you to work more like this!

Bonus Point 5/5
I will give you all the 5 points you deserved. I love your story lots, and it made me cry badly. Your story ROCKS!

Total: 100/100

I love your story lots, and I wish you write more! I am your new reader, and please do write more like this!

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