BitterSweet Love (One-Shots) by YoonHee
Title : BitterSweet Love (One-Shots)
Author : YoonHee
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Minty/chapter_2.shtml
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
`Story Title [did it catch my attention?] : 3/5
I thought that the title didn’t really relate to that one one-shot, but since this is a one-shot, I guess that’s fine. The title didn’t really catch my attention, but just seemed like a regular title.
`Appearance [what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -/10
I usually don’t really read stories without posters or backgrounds, so knowing that you didn’t have a poster or background, I won’t count this part.
`Forewords [did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 5/10
The forewords was boring, but only because it’s a one-shot. I know that one-shots usually don’t have much information, especially if it’s an application one-shot.
`Plot [was the plot cliché or was it interesting?] : 13/15
The ply was actually really unique. I’ve never read anything like it before. It was different.
`Characterization [was I able to learn about the characters?] : 6/10
I wasn’t really able to get the characters. There were parts to when I was able to go along with the characters and know about them, but you didn’t really describe them. I wasn’t able to visualize them in my head.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 9/10
It was creative and I thought it had a lot of originality. It was different from any other story I have read. Great job.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary [was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 8/10
There wasn’t really much that bothered me with the understanding of your story. There were some grammar mistakes, but they weren’t that big.
`Flow [was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 6/10
I thought that the flow was a little bit too fast for me. It seemed like everything was happening in rush, that I wasn’t able to catch up with everything. Details left out, but the describing and everything was fine.
`Writing Style [did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 15/15
I had absolutely no trouble with your writing style. I thought that I was perfect, and it was really easy for me to read without going back to re-read and everything.
`Overall Enjoyment [did I enjoy this story?] : 4/5
I really enjoyed the story, but there seemed to be something missing for me. But overall, it was a great story. (:
`Total : 69/90
`Bonus : 3/5
Overall Total: 72/90
Author : YoonHee
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Minty/chapter_2.shtml
Reviewed by Mickey @ WonderfulxMemories
`Story Title [did it catch my attention?] : 3/5
I thought that the title didn’t really relate to that one one-shot, but since this is a one-shot, I guess that’s fine. The title didn’t really catch my attention, but just seemed like a regular title.
`Appearance [what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -/10
I usually don’t really read stories without posters or backgrounds, so knowing that you didn’t have a poster or background, I won’t count this part.
`Forewords [did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 5/10
The forewords was boring, but only because it’s a one-shot. I know that one-shots usually don’t have much information, especially if it’s an application one-shot.
`Plot [was the plot cliché or was it interesting?] : 13/15
The ply was actually really unique. I’ve never read anything like it before. It was different.
`Characterization [was I able to learn about the characters?] : 6/10
I wasn’t really able to get the characters. There were parts to when I was able to go along with the characters and know about them, but you didn’t really describe them. I wasn’t able to visualize them in my head.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 9/10
It was creative and I thought it had a lot of originality. It was different from any other story I have read. Great job.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary [was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 8/10
There wasn’t really much that bothered me with the understanding of your story. There were some grammar mistakes, but they weren’t that big.
`Flow [was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 6/10
I thought that the flow was a little bit too fast for me. It seemed like everything was happening in rush, that I wasn’t able to catch up with everything. Details left out, but the describing and everything was fine.
`Writing Style [did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 15/15
I had absolutely no trouble with your writing style. I thought that I was perfect, and it was really easy for me to read without going back to re-read and everything.
`Overall Enjoyment [did I enjoy this story?] : 4/5
I really enjoyed the story, but there seemed to be something missing for me. But overall, it was a great story. (:
`Total : 69/90
`Bonus : 3/5
Overall Total: 72/90
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