Not Enough Love by 'Niii

Title : Not Enough Love [oneshot]
Author : 'Niii
Link : http://winglin.net/fanfic/not_enough/
Reviewed by Elena @ WonderfulxMemories

*Reviewer's Note : this review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding with the author or anything of that sort. I'm seriously sorry if I was rude or harsh. This a honest review.

`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : 3/5
*Your story title was weird. It attracted my attention.

`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : 6/10
*It was pretty interesting. The guardian angel concept is totally rare these days.

`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 5/10
*Your forewords were nice but I find it to be quite confusing.

`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : 9/15
*Your plot was nice. It was interesting. I'm still confused if the relationship between both the characters is friendship or love.

`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : 3/10
*Your characterization was poor. You need to elaborate more on characters.

`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 6/10
*The storyline was very creative and original.

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 5/10
*There were spelling mistakes. Your grammar needs improvement and you need to use more uncommon words.

`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 4/10
*Your flow was too fast.

`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 9/15
*Your writing style was simple and nice.

`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : 3/5
`Total : 53/100

`Bonus : 5/5

Overall Total: 58/100