Monday, September 21, 2009

Quadrilateral Affection by e.c.jereza_stargazer

Title : Quadrilateral Affection
Author : e.c.jereza_stargazer
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/QA/
Reviewed by Elena @ WonderfulxMemories

*Reviewer's Note : this review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding with the author or anything of that sort. I'm seriously sorry if I was rude or harsh. This a honest review.

`Story Title : 4/5
*The story's title was compatible with the plot.

`Appearance : 5/10
*I do admit that the story's forewords and poster were attractive but it was still an ordinary story.

`Forewords : 6/10
*Your forewords were good.

`Plot : 10/15
*I know that your story was entirely cliche but the way you placed the twists and spices in your story were good. This can impress anyone.

`Characterisation : 5/10
*You were okay in describing your characters but you can still add more into your plot.

`Creativity/Originality : 5/10
*As I said before, your story was entirely cliche but it was good in it's own way.

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 5/10
*There were bits of mistake in your work. Your choice of vocabulary was completely ordinary.

`Flow : 6/10
*I love your story's pace. It was balanced and nice.

`Writing Style : 9/15
*Your style was ordinary but yet good for anyone to read and enjoy

`Overall Enjoyment : 4/5
`Total : 59/100

`Bonus : 5/5

Overall Total: 64/100

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