Title : Internet Romance
Author : WinterNight
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/beautifulwish/
Reviewed by Elena @ WonderfulxMemories

*This review has nothing to do with any personal misunderstanding or anything of that sort. It is an honest review on a story. I'm seriously sorry if I am harsh or rude.

`Story Title : 3/5
* Your story title was too simple.

`Appearance : 5/10
*I knew the storyline would be slightly different but my expectations were average.

`Forewords : 5/10
*Your forewords gave a short preview on the story but there is room for more.

`Plot : 7/15
*Your plot is not entirely cliche'. Your story is a bit interesting but it still is a common plot line.

`Characterization : 5/10
*Your characterization was not balanced. You explained a lot about Jiro but not much on Selina. So, you should elaborate more on the main character.

`Creativity/Originality : 5/10
*Your story is not original. Your creativity was limited.

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 4/10
*There were sometimes I don't understand your story. You got a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes.

`Flow: 6/10
*Your flow was balanced throughout most of the story.

`Writing Style : 6/15
*Your writing style needs improvement. I wasn't able to understand your story at some points.

`Overall Enjoyment : 3/5

`Total : 49/100

`Bonus : 5/5

Overall Total: 54/100