Setbacks Of A Winglin Author by nom d'écran .
Title : Setbacks Of A Winglin Author
Author : nom d'écran .
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/HEEZYOO6/
Reviewed by Kiyoko @ WonderfulxMemories
*Please don’t take it personally; I am just sharing my opinion on your story and helping you improve on your writing. Hope I’m not too harsh or strict.
`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : 5/5
This one really caught my attention. I’m a winglin author myself, so it immediately caught my attention to know what you’re trying to mean.
`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -/10
Usually, for every story there’s a poster and a background. So I won’t count the points for this because this story can’t possibly have a poster or background for this. This is a way different story than others.
`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 3/10
Well…your forewords are very short…so it wouldn’t want to make some people read more. Luckily, your title made it more interesting for you to read.
`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : 15/15
The plot was interesting to me, about winglin authors and some of their bad sides of it.
`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : -/10
I won’t count the characterization part since the characters in the one shot refers to all winglin authors.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 10/10
The one shot was really creative to me. The originality of this story isn’t what you usually see on winglin.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 9/10
I was able to understand your one shot. Your vocabulary and spelling was very well done. For the last part, the: To All Author’s part. You don’t have to keep repeating the words. Combine the reasons and make them into a paragraph.
`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 8/10
Your flow was a little too fast for me. For the apply stories part, you got to the applying part then to genuineness and copy catters, then back, to the applying stories. But the others part were smooth.
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`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 13/15
Your writing style is okay was easy for me to read, although there was a lot of spacing, some sentences could be made into a paragraph.
`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : 5/5
I liked this one shot. It can show winglin authors on what kind of problems would be going on in winglin. About how winglin changed over the years at times, about authors trying to be recognized, and all the other things you put into your one shots.
`Total : 68/100
`Bonus : 5/5
I gave bonus since your one shot is one of a kind(:
Overall Total: 73/100
Author : nom d'écran .
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/HEEZYOO6/
Reviewed by Kiyoko @ WonderfulxMemories
*Please don’t take it personally; I am just sharing my opinion on your story and helping you improve on your writing. Hope I’m not too harsh or strict.
`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : 5/5
This one really caught my attention. I’m a winglin author myself, so it immediately caught my attention to know what you’re trying to mean.
`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -/10
Usually, for every story there’s a poster and a background. So I won’t count the points for this because this story can’t possibly have a poster or background for this. This is a way different story than others.
`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 3/10
Well…your forewords are very short…so it wouldn’t want to make some people read more. Luckily, your title made it more interesting for you to read.
`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : 15/15
The plot was interesting to me, about winglin authors and some of their bad sides of it.
`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : -/10
I won’t count the characterization part since the characters in the one shot refers to all winglin authors.
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 10/10
The one shot was really creative to me. The originality of this story isn’t what you usually see on winglin.
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 9/10
I was able to understand your one shot. Your vocabulary and spelling was very well done. For the last part, the: To All Author’s part. You don’t have to keep repeating the words. Combine the reasons and make them into a paragraph.
`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 8/10
Your flow was a little too fast for me. For the apply stories part, you got to the applying part then to genuineness and copy catters, then back, to the applying stories. But the others part were smooth.
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`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 13/15
Your writing style is okay was easy for me to read, although there was a lot of spacing, some sentences could be made into a paragraph.
`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : 5/5
I liked this one shot. It can show winglin authors on what kind of problems would be going on in winglin. About how winglin changed over the years at times, about authors trying to be recognized, and all the other things you put into your one shots.
`Total : 68/100
`Bonus : 5/5
I gave bonus since your one shot is one of a kind(:
Overall Total: 73/100
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