2nd Chance by xdorkyx

Title : 2nd Chance
Author : xdorkyx
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jinxtae/
Reviewed by Tinaher @ WonderfulxMemories
Title: 5/5
The title is new, and it appears to match the storyline!

Poster/Background/Appearance: 9/10
The poster and background is nice. The poster is cute, but then I think it could’ve been better. The background is overall cute!

Forewords: 10/10
Your foreword was great. There characters and a plot to it.

Plot: 14/15
Your plot was good, and I like it.

Characterization: 9/10
Your characterization is good. You told me who the characters were, and there are lots.

Creativity/Originality: 9/10
Your creativity is GOOD!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
Your spelling, grammar, and vocabularies are great, but you had some mistakes, and you didn’t have your periods at the end, and I didn’t really understand if the sentenced ended or not.

Flow: 9/10
Your flow is going great.

Writing Style: 15/15
Your writing style is cool, and I enjoyed reading your kind of style with no periods at the end of each sentence.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I enjoyed this story. It’s so cute!
Total: 92/100

Bonus: 5/5
Of course you’re getting the bonus points. I love your story, I am your new reader, and update soon! Cute story!

Overall Total: 97/100