Then End. by UnknownViet
Title : Then End.
Author : UnknownViet
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/end/
Reviewed by Keerain @ WonderfulxMemories.
Title: 5/5
I think the title is interesting and I would click on it if I saw it in the main index. It is relevant to the storyline and I personally favor it; the title has a nice ring plus it gives off a strong kind of vibe to me.
Poster/Background/Appearance: -/10
I won’t insert this into the evaluating system since you already told me you are still waiting for your request ^^
Forewords: 5/10
The forewords were a little packed. It would be nicer if you out spaces like normally. By doing this, you will also give the readers a bit more feel to the story. Avoid using just one whole paragraph for the forewords next time, okay? One big chunk is not pretty. It didn’t lure me to click the next button.
Plot: 14/15
I think it’s quite refreshing yet I think I feel like I’ve seen this kind of plot before. Nevertheless, I think it was capturing and made me want to scroll down as I read.
Characterization: 10/10
I love how your characters bloom with your writing. YOU defined them; you whispered to me their profiles. I kind of get why Miki wanted the break-up yet somehow it is still a mystery to me. Nice job in keeping the sentimentality there.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Your creativity blew me off my feet. I loved the whole idea, the whole storyline. I would elaborate more but my mind is blank at the moment.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
Your grammar was okay but you made lots of typing errors, my dear. It won’t hurt to actually edit your mistakes. Spelling mistakes are common but do try to minimize as they can ruin the mood of the story.
You could have used bigger words; there’s always room for knowledge.
Flow: 10/10
You gave me an ending, you handed me a start. The flow was okay but not great; just okay.
Writing Style: 14/15
It is neat and understandable. You are pretty descriptive but you can delve in deeper.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I like fanfics that are readable. I enjoyed this piece very much ^^
Total: 81/90
Bonus: -/5
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Overall Total: 81/90
• I think my review contradicts with demon goddess over there but from where I see it; you have potential and the fanfic was good enough.
Author : UnknownViet
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/end/
Reviewed by Keerain @ WonderfulxMemories.
Title: 5/5
I think the title is interesting and I would click on it if I saw it in the main index. It is relevant to the storyline and I personally favor it; the title has a nice ring plus it gives off a strong kind of vibe to me.
Poster/Background/Appearance: -/10
I won’t insert this into the evaluating system since you already told me you are still waiting for your request ^^
Forewords: 5/10
The forewords were a little packed. It would be nicer if you out spaces like normally. By doing this, you will also give the readers a bit more feel to the story. Avoid using just one whole paragraph for the forewords next time, okay? One big chunk is not pretty. It didn’t lure me to click the next button.
Plot: 14/15
I think it’s quite refreshing yet I think I feel like I’ve seen this kind of plot before. Nevertheless, I think it was capturing and made me want to scroll down as I read.
Characterization: 10/10
I love how your characters bloom with your writing. YOU defined them; you whispered to me their profiles. I kind of get why Miki wanted the break-up yet somehow it is still a mystery to me. Nice job in keeping the sentimentality there.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Your creativity blew me off my feet. I loved the whole idea, the whole storyline. I would elaborate more but my mind is blank at the moment.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
Your grammar was okay but you made lots of typing errors, my dear. It won’t hurt to actually edit your mistakes. Spelling mistakes are common but do try to minimize as they can ruin the mood of the story.
You could have used bigger words; there’s always room for knowledge.
Flow: 10/10
You gave me an ending, you handed me a start. The flow was okay but not great; just okay.
Writing Style: 14/15
It is neat and understandable. You are pretty descriptive but you can delve in deeper.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
I like fanfics that are readable. I enjoyed this piece very much ^^
Total: 81/90
Bonus: -/5
-
Overall Total: 81/90
• I think my review contradicts with demon goddess over there but from where I see it; you have potential and the fanfic was good enough.
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