My Girlfriend is My Bodyguard by Acc.

Title : My Girlfriend is My Bodyguard
Author : Acc.
Link : http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/acc_randoms
Reviewed by Kiyoko @ WonderfulxMemories

Please don’t take it personally; I am just sharing my opinion on your story.

`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : 3/5
It did catch my attention, but I did see similar titles to it.

`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : 7/10
The poster kind of caught my attention, but it's not eye catching. Adding some quotes would help readers read more.

`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 5/10
You did introduce the characters and say the plot, but you should also say their personality of their characters. And adding a preview would be nice for people to read more(:

`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : 12/15
The plot is simple but yet interesting. I never read a story about a girl being undercover as a bodyguard, so it caught my attention to read more.

`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : 5/10
. You did introduce the characters, but adding what their personality is would make readers know more about the characters.

`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 8/10
This was pretty original, but there are some plots like this. But from other plots I read, this was the only plot that they made a kendo- skilled girl be a bodyguard.

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 10/10
Your spelling, vocabulary, and grammar was very impressive! You have a very wide range of vocabulary!(:

`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 8/10
Your flow was smooth, but at some parts it did get kind of slow for me.

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`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 13/15
I liked your writing style. It’s not crunched up and easy to read, but some chapters were too long. You can also combine some sentences if some sentences are too short or don’t make your sentences too long since some were long.

`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : 5/5
I love your story! It made me laugh, but it did make me sad at points.

`Total : 76/100

`Bonus : 5/5
I love your story, and I gave you full bonus for your wide range of vocabulary(:

Overall Total: 81/100